Nexus of the End

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Nexus of the End

Postby jujdap360 » Tue May 27, 2008 3:08 pm

This is for discussion/review of my story "Nexus of the End".

For starters, this is also where I'll post art for the story. As you can see, it focuses on the age following Last Raven, using an ending that combined the Jack-O and Vertex endings, but Zinaida, Evangel, and Jack O themselves are dead. It will include Mars and remix the AC2 storyline to better fit the AC3 universe.
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Re: Nexus of the End

Postby Qastor » Tue Jun 10, 2008 5:22 pm

Very nice beginning it leaves me wanting more please keep writing maybe Ill start posting my SL era Free lance story "Purple skies" if I ever finish book two. :mrgreen:
oh yeah back in the saddle like Ive ever been out of it.
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Re: Nexus of the End

Postby jujdap360 » Tue Jul 29, 2008 4:37 pm

AC Designs

AC: Hollow Night (Will O Wisp)

Head: Cricket
Core: CR-C06US
Arms: A05-LANGUR
Legs: CR-LH89F
Booster: B01-BIRDIE2
Generator: KUJAKU
Radiator: RAGORA
FCS:MONJU
L Arm Weapon: CR-WL06LB4
R Arm Weapon: CR-WR93RL
Extensions: CR-E92RM3
L Back Weapon: WB14RG-LADON
R Back Weapon: WB22M-DRYAD2

AC: Ether Knight

Head: YH15-DRONE
Core: YC08-ICURUS
Arms: A05-LANGUR
Legs: LH09-COUGAR2
Booster: CR-B81
Generator: KUJAKU
Radiator: CR-R92
FCS: MONJU
R Arm Weapon: CR-WR93RL
L Arm Weapon: CR-WL06LB4
L Back Weapon:MAGORAGA
R Back Weapon: CR-WB78GL
Extensions: FUNI
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Well that'll do for now, there are plenty of other designs (mostly custom) that are in the fic, so I'll update when they show up. I kind of tweaked some of these schemes after I posted the last chapter, only because I can't stand certain types of weapons and FCS's. Thanks to all those reading and expect a sketch of the MMACs soon, as well as original weapons. Oh and a bit of a spoiler, somebody's going to get a remake!
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The pen maybe mightier than the sword, but the gun decides who wields the pen.



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Re: Nexus of the End

Postby The Errant » Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:32 pm

I have to say I was actually rather pleasantly surprised. The dialogue comes off almost perfectly, and the action is well-scripted. Also the plot from what I see so far is nice and grounded in realism (so far as AC can be grounded in realism anyway), just how I like plots to be. Keep writing this man, I'm reading.
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