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MSG Warlords -need help-

Postby Deathlok » Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:57 pm

My new fanfic. Since Gundam has a more fleshed out story than Armored Core that's what I'm doing. I just need editing help or any suggestions that would make the story better.

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Postby ClefJ » Mon Nov 20, 2006 11:29 pm

You already got mine... I think.
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Postby Deathlok » Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:50 pm

ClefJ wrote:You already got mine... I think.


Yes I did :D
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Postby Squall » Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:38 pm

disregard before, I got confused there.
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Postby Deathlok » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:22 pm

Chapter 3 is up.

Any suggestions?
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Postby ClefJ » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:43 pm

A mite short is all. Doing better, I think. I'll wait for more before I give any real criticisms. In any case, please continue.
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Postby Deathlok » Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:02 am

Chapter 4 should be up soon.
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